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Sandeep 's World >> Thinkin' Aloud
Tuesday, 20 November 2007
Thoughts under the same roof

He was happy ... his best friend had come back from US ... and straight away to his place ... He was always in awe of his friend: for the laughs he generates with his little sis, parents and even his wife. Everybody seemed to like him ... and his unending reserves of energy! He was badly missed when not around.

He knew his little sis had a crush on his friend and always wondered if the interest was mutual. Wud've been gr8 if it is ... He looked around to his wife for an opinion; she was reading something and playing with her mobile at the same time. He went back to his thoughts ...

They were happy too ... to see their son's best friend after a long gap. They always wanted him to be part of their family and never lost a chance to mention it. They knew their daughter adored him ... and hoped that he was interested too! She is about to complete her college. It was time to bring it before his parents. What an alliance it would be!

She was ecstatic to see her man back ... and the mobile kept making clicking sounds ... message after message:

She: "I think everybody slept ... my door is open!"

He: "Ur brother is in next room. I dont want to be thrown out."

She: "Ok ... I will come there then!"

He: "Nah ... not today"



She: "Hmmm ... will u come to college tomorrow?"

He: "What time?"


It went on for another hour ... He mite have been tired with all the travel ... she thought ... and slowly drifted to sleep still dreaming abt him sneaking into her room ...

He had no choice but to disappoint her this time ... coz he cudnt have had two women in his room at the same time! But he was more receptive to another set of text messages!

She: "Slept?"

He: "Nah ... Waiting for u!"

She: ":-) I cant wait to be with u"

He: ":-) ... isnt he still awake?"

She: "He'll be asleep soon ... and wudnt get up. Keep the door open"

He: "The door is already open"

He always liked taking risks. What better than this one?

An hour later ... a silhoutte came out of one of the rooms, gave one last look at her husband to make sure he is asleep and rushed to the adjacent room. The door closed behind her!

Posted by usandeep at 7:22 PM
Updated: Saturday, 23 February 2008 10:53 AM
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Wednesday, 21 November 2007 - 10:02 AM

Name: "anonymous"

having read the rest os ur write ups i expected this twist   :)

Thursday, 22 November 2007 - 3:03 AM

Name: "Preetha"
Home Page: http://littlenothingsfrompree.blogspot.com

Holy Fools....Sighhh!!!!!

Saturday, 15 December 2007 - 4:40 PM

Name: "anonymous"

xtramarital...:) so much of guts in a lady to hv twin services at her home?...i dbt..:)
The second sentence confuses the HE and HIM...first thought tht its a case of incest...:)
why dint u develop the story...i feel tht, then it wud hv been better...at least the last phase onnu valichu neettikoodayirunno???
nalla twist aaayirunnu...njan xpect cheythilla...:)
but still... two timing :( one own frnds wife and sis... actullay HATS OFF to the talented young man...:P

Sunday, 16 December 2007 - 7:46 AM

Name: "Tasneen"

hey there :) The world is so connected! I didnt know you had a blog, let alone that you went to Kerala Blog. Love the pix and the travelogues.

And of course I remember you.

Monday, 31 December 2007 - 11:58 AM

Name: "Cuckoo"
Home Page: http://cuculus.blogspot.com

My first time here. And I must say I am impressed.

I liked your style very much, and what a story !! The style somewhere matches with some of mine.

Will keep coming here.

Wish you a very Happy New Year. 


Tuesday, 5 February 2008 - 11:54 AM

Name: "Dhanya"
Home Page: http://itsmyownspace.blogspot.com/

Hey guess you should do more thinking aloud.. It brought back a smile to my face.. Thank You :)

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